Click on the button above to download a resource on A Christmas Carol that’s designed to help students develop their writing. It was two parts:
The essay is on the left-hand side of page two and the suggestions for improvement are on the right. The red boxes aren’t on the actual document: they’re just there to highlight what I mean!
Here’s a snip ⤵️
When I printed the resource for the students I teach, I popped some lines onto the right-hand side of an A3 page and trimmed the excess paper from around the margins. I then directed students towards upgrading specific paragraphs – they didn’t rewrite the whole thing.
Here’s a (slightly wonky) picture ⤵️
🔍 You can access a similar resource on An Inspector Calls by clicking here
Hope it’s useful –
Doug